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NaNoWriMo Day 18: Lessons Learned on Writing My First Thriller Novel

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My word count = 17,399. Here's my video with text below if you just want to read.

In the last few weeks I have learned:

  • I am behind in word count, but I don't mind much. I am enjoying the process and exploring ideas. I am also continuing to blog, tweet and read – plus move house, the day job and oh yes, real life! I am serious about this novel so I know it will take a good 9 months to 1 year to actually get into a state that means you could read it. This month I start writing a novel, not finish a novel!
  • You can't edit a blank page. Yes, this has been said before but now I actually get it! It's ok to write crap because you will edit it later, or completely rewrite it. But if you don't write it at all, then you will not even have something basic to work with. You can't move the story forward if you don't write something down.
  • If you have a problem with your plot, get your characters to talk about it. My book is a thriller and of course, there is a villain with a weapon that threatens the world. I have been struggling to get the details of this weapon without using cliche. So in the end, I had the 2 main characters in a room talking about it – “so what is this weapon?” … evil villain explains… “and why do you need this?”…explains… “and why do all those people need to die?”…… etc. No doubt the scene will go but the idea remains and now I have a clear idea of what the weapon is and how it ties to the plot (plus I got some word count!
  • Writers spend most of their time in the outback. The week 2 pep talk email was from Maureen Johnson who wrote a lovely letter based around Australia, where I currently live. She pointed out that the writers life is like Australia. You spend most of your time in the outback, alone, struggling with your ideas and writing and then occasionally pop out to the big cities like Sydney for a writer's workshop or festival. If you can enjoy that life, then all is good. Personally, I left London in 2000 to escape to the outback. I spent 3 months in Western Australia and Northern Territory camping and sleeping in swag under the stars. Being in the outback was a spiritual and moving experience for me so this email resonated deeply. I am certainly happy being in the middle!
  • Even when moving house, you can still churn out a few thousand words. I am exhausted from the move but I am motivated to write so I managed 45 mins in Starbucks after the day job. I am now around 12,000 words behind but hey, I am enjoying the process and also feeling like this is a viable book that will take the next year to flesh out, edit and rework.
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  • Great post! I've really been enjoying reading about your experience with Nanowrimo. I have entered it six years in a row and have failed every time, but this year I have been writing every day and am at 30,000 words, which is SO exciting. Thanks for the tips and inspiration!

  • Awesome video! I love what you said about 'you can't edit a blank page'. A good way to stop thinking about writing and actually get some writing done. I also like how you said your goal for NaNoWriMo is to start a novel, not finish it. Finishing a novel takes a lot longer than 1 month, so this way of thinking keeps things in perspective.

    Keep up the good work!

  • Loved the tip on getting your characters to dialog on the problem. I just did this with a character that was up against a more experienced adversary (her boss) and it worked out well. (The character was able to garner some sympathy for her plight and I was able to get 2,000 words closer to my goal.)

    Cheers,
    --Jeff

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